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Punctuation and Run-ons
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Follow
below as we continue our discussion of run-ons.
To view the prior lesson, 'Run-ons, Part 1', click here.
How can you repair this run-on?
Below, incorrect punctuation has
created run-ons:
PROBLEM #1
What's
the problem
in this student's
sentence below?
Problem:
He was William Taft he was 6 feet 4 inches tall.
Below, incorrect punctuation has created run-ons:
Solution #1: Create
two separate simple sentences:
⇒ ______________________________________________________________________
Solution #2: Create
one compound sentence that connects
the two simple sentences with
the coordinator, and.
⇒ ________________________________________________________________________
Solution #3: Create
one sentence which consists of two
independent but related clauses. The first part
will be punctuated with a semi-colon,
and the second part will continue in the same sentence
and end with a period.
⇒ __________________________________________________________________________
PROBLEM #2
Problem:
Life is not fair, some
struggle and others don't.
Below, incorrect punctuation has
created run-ons:
Solution #1: Create
three separate simple sentences.
⇒ _____________________________________________________________________
Solution #2:
Create two separate sentences.
The first one will be a simple sentence
and the second one will be a compound sentence.
⇒ ________________________________________________________________________
Solution #3: Create
one sentence which consists of two
independent but related clauses. The first part
will be punctuated with a semi-colon,
and the second part will continue in the same sentence
and end with a period.
⇒ _________________________________________________________________________
Solution #3: Create
one complex sentence which consists of
a main (independent) clause, and
a subordinate (dependent) clause.
You can use
the subordinator because
to begin the subordinate clause.
⇒ _________________________________________________________________________
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Which Way Is Best?
Of the suggestions above, which do you prefer, and why?
A good writer will add variation to his sentence structure. Just like he will not use the same word excessively but will vary his vocabulary and use of metaphor, he will neither overuse nor underuse any one type of sentence, or any one coordinator or subordinator.
There are many books available that will help you to vary your writing style.
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